sky
Egg
Posts: 1
|
Sky
Oct 12, 2020 21:37:11 GMT
Post by sky on Oct 12, 2020 21:37:11 GMT
Sky Skylar Female: 11 : Rank : Sexuality Tribe(s): Nightwing Appearance: {Dark and purple } Loves meeting new people but is shy. Can't wait to sing or do art. Doesn't like doing much stuff around a lot of people. Abilities: Has visions. Can see through thick clouds. Personality: {kind, nice, shy when meeting new people.} Known for fighting to protect freinds. History: Her egg was found by a group of Sandwings in Possibility. They didn't know where she'd come from, but decided to all raise her. She became very close with them, because dragons outside that group didn't understand why a nightwing was being raised by sandwings. Family: no family parents :Doesn't know them mother : Doesn't know father : Doesn't know friends : Anybody thats nice The dragons who raised her/grew up with her: OPEN! enemies: Doesn't have any
|
|
|
Sky
Oct 12, 2020 21:43:11 GMT
Post by Mantis Shrimp on Oct 12, 2020 21:43:11 GMT
Hey there Sky! Your character has a few things that need to be fixed before he can be made into a character. Nightwings don't have fireproof scales, or the ability to hold their breaths for a long time, as those are Mudwing traits. His history could be a little more detailed, as the only thing you listed was more of a personality trait. Also, the image you used is a little too purple for a nightwing, although that might just be an issue with you not having art of your character. sky
|
|
|
Sky
Oct 29, 2020 23:48:44 GMT
Post by Mantis Shrimp on Oct 29, 2020 23:48:44 GMT
skyThank you for making some of the changes I suggested! If you need help coming up with a history for her, pm me or ask on the discord! Normally, future sight isn't allowed on a first character, but because Sky was one of the first character profiles made, I'll allow it! All you need to do for her to be accepted is to add a history!
|
|